Share your upcoming product's tagline and get feedback what you can improve?
Carsten Pleiser
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When you launch on PH, you need to describe what your product does in under 60 characters.
Write down your tagline below and get feedback. Will it grab people's attention? Does it work? Will it stick?
You can use https://charactercounter.com/ to make sure you're not exceeding 60 chars.
PS: Please upvote this post, so we can help more makers.
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Carsten Pleiser@ckpleiser
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For Paperless.io, I currently have the following tagline, but I'm not sure if it sticks:
"Work faster and smarter with secure eSignatures π"
Alternatively, I have:
"Create, edit, send, sign & automate business documents"
Any feedback as to which one works better?
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@ckpleiser I like more
"Work faster and smarter with secure eSignatures π"
And i would change it to
"Faster, Safer and smarter eSignatures"
Hey @ckpleiser
Nice post! For Speetals (https://speetals.com/) i have this reworked version of it:
"Web Performance monitoring tool that recovers lost $ and make users happy"
What do you think?
Thanks!
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@loukilaymen I find make users happy a bit cliche.
Maybe "Web performance monitoring tool to recover lost revenue"
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Thanks for helping out :)
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