I made web framework for indie makers that makes it easy to get a working product out the door
David Miranda
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I'd be very interested in getting some of your feedback on the landing page:
https://invis.io/2NUUPSTXVYU#/393567039_Home
This product will launch very soon, so I need as much help as I can get.
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Pierre Maynial@pierre_maynial
Good work. Very compelling value proposition. The testimonial section seems credible enough. Maybe the "constantly improving" benefit of the product could be slightly explained?
Feel free to check out our landing page as well ;)
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Polite Pop
Polite Pop
@pmaynial Your landing page looks really nice, although I didn't like the scroll-jacking. One thing though — I didn't understand the main thing you do (overall) until I read the letter at the bottom of the page. I'd consider putting that higher up if I were you. It captures all the value you're providing in a short, easy statement. If that letter was the entire home page, I think it would work well. Then, you could have the current home page be on a "features" or "solutions" page, where you'd explain the strategies you use for achieving all the promises in the letter.