A freelancer working on a promotional Video. Feedback needed.

A freelancer is currently working on a promotional video for a @Kickstarter Campaign for http://0effort.app Video Here: https://twitter.com/AndreyBulezyuk/status/1475060051396206598 Dear @IndieHackers & @ProductHunt Community, take a look at it and throw at me your criticism about the Video. Main goal: Hit funding Target 69k$!