Feedback for my landing page!
Jerryton
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I just want to know, when you landed on my website's homepage, what did you feel?
https://swatle.ai
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Kostya Bolshukhin@kostyabolsh
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Hey Jerryton!
At some point, PH community were kind and gave me ton of feedback. So, paying forward
First, on the Hero section, I felt that I didn't have any idea what Swatle does and why it's special.
— "Streamline Team Collaboration" and "Solution for Enhanced Teamwork" mean +- the same to me
— as I use tone of all-in-on staff like Notion, Miro, I got no idea what I can get with Swatle
— and was a bit concerned I didnt see a video or screenshots from product somewhere near main page
Also you have a lot of text, which is hard to get through. I prefer when products show, not tell
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I feel like you shouldn't use words like streamline, enhanced, boost, harness, intricate etc - looks AI-generated
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Love the simple and clean design! The colors and illustrations really pop. I immediately got a sense of what Swatle does and how it could help me be more productive. Only suggestion would be to add a few customer testimonials or case studies to build more trust and credibility. But overall the messaging is super clear and compelling. Nice work!
Hi Jerryton!
The landing page seemed beautiful.
But It was hard to recognise what swatle is, in the first go.
Hey. Checked out your website. Love the colors. But I have to agree with the previous commenters.
From the first sight it is kinda hard to understand what is the tool for. I would change the tagline "Your Complete Solution for Enhanced Teamwork" to something more informative like:
"Streamline your workflow with AI-driven task management and effortless collaboration."
"Simplify your projects, optimize teamwork, and let AI handle the details."
"Transform conversations into actions with intuitive AI and seamless team coordination."
"Elevate your productivity with smart task management and real-time collaboration tools."
"Manage tasks, boost collaboration, and stay ahead with AI-powered project solutions."
(kudos, ChatGPT :D)
Regarding the Features block: too many letters. In this dynamic time it is nice when you are able to read the page diagonally and get the idea right away.