hey guys, need some help on my landing page

ashen
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can you guys tell me what you think about my landing for my Twitter Second Brain product that i’m releasing sunday? i’m still working on it :)) thank you! https://caramel-fish-1520.typedream.app

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Vimal Kutmutia
Hey Ashen, congratulations for the launch. I went through your landing page, it's a good start. Here are few pointers that you may want to consider — 1. Looks plain vanilla. You might want to add some colors to it. 2. Enhance the size of the product gif on hero section. It's always convincing to have clear visual of the product and customer is trying to purchase. 3. If you can, add a trimmed down version of the template as a free file to let the customer in and see how the template is and can be useful. 4. Improve the design of the feature graphics. 5. Add couple of pointers after the feature descriptions. 6. Left aligned the feature title and descriptions 7. Add a video if possible on how to use the template and what are the benefits 8. Whats inside graphic has 8 pointers. You can present them in a 4 x 2 grid format with 2 lines of description and icons added to it. It looks more intuitive that way. 9. Add some testimonials. Social proof is very important. 10. Oh, you have a free product. Highlight to download / access the free product on hero section CTA. People would always want to try first before buy. 11. Over design has lot of room for improvement IMHO Hope this helps Ashen. -- I'm the founder of Craftemo.com (A website & SaaS design on subscription service) and will be launching soon on PH.