Is there such a thing as too simple for landing pages?

Julian Fleig
8 replies
I have the feeling my landing page doesn’t work well in directing people to my app in the App Store (I’m pretty inexperienced when it comes to this sort of things). Do you have any tips or good examples? My landingpage: UseAI.io

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André J
Clarity over accuracy
Jake Harrison
Too simple, you can set up some rewards from landing page to download App
Julian Fleig
@jakeharr A good idea, but since I don't want to make money from it, I'm not sure what I could give people as a reward. Do you have a suggestion?
Mighil
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html.earth
It's all about the copy. Jason Fried's copy on HEY and Basecamp is worth checking out. You can learn a lot from how he clearly conveys their vision in a simple, engaging way. Their landing pages are swell IMO. Tip: Brevity and clarity are important when crafting messaging for a website. Focus on being brutally honest yet personable to develop your own distinctive voice that will resonate with people.
Shayan Ali
Ok so what I see is not good is that its way too simple. Simplicity is good in design but, it is good when used correctly. The landing page lacks emotions, there are no emotional feeling I am getting when I see that landing and I think the font can get better and bold. Here is a landing page example that I recently built: https://www.figma.com/proto/NV0S...
Julian Fleig
@itsshayanali First of all, thank you for your feedback! I will implement your tips and try to bring in more emotions and revise the font. Thanks!