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    Launch day tomorrow! Which one of the following taglines is more engaging?

    Royce Wong
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    1. InOrbit - designed specifically for today's hybrid or remote teams. Operate with unparalleled efficiency, improve productivity, deliver consistent outcomes, and get more work done. or 2. InOrbit - Your meetings, frameworks, and actions. Aligned. Transform your team's potential into impact with our enablement platform. Achieve even better results together.

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    Royce Wong
    InOrbit.io
    InOrbit.io
    Thank you all! We're going with no.2.
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    Royce Wong
    InOrbit.io
    InOrbit.io
    We're live and welcome your support!
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    Heleana Grace
    Videodeck
    1 for me. If I were to look at your website for the first time I would need a short description/explanation of the product, so I feel like the first one does just that. :)
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    Royce Wong
    InOrbit.io
    InOrbit.io
    @heleana Thank you. Balancing the value over the specifics of what it does is a lil tricky. We're getting better.
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    Verdi Kapuku
    Appshine - Make your app beautiful
    Appshine - Make your app beautiful
    I like the 2nd sentence of the first. The first sentence confuses me because I don't know yet what InOrbit does and I can't judge whether it's a fit for my team configuration yet.
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    emmanuel Onuoha
    Hey Royce. Good luck tomorrow The second sentence works better than the first in my opinion. I'll pick second over first. 🤝 I am looking to connect with founders launching products soon. I'll follow you and hope you follow back top. Cheers
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    Rahul
    I’ll go with the second one . Reason , it’s eye catchy syllable wise it’s sounding good .
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    Divine Rivers
    Number 2 IMO. Also good luck tomorrow. We just launched The Marketplace for Everyday Professionals to supplement their Salary today for sign-ups. Check it out at TheCareering.com My Co-Founder and I are also looking for feedback from other Founders and builders as we are first-time Founders. Would love to hear your thoughts on everything from design, flow, idea, our solution, problem, and Marketing. More Info producthunt.com/discussions/we-just-launched-and-careering-is-now-live-looking-for-all-the-feedback-we-can-get-thanks
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    Jeremy Jenkins
    With its promise to empower remote and hybrid teams through efficiency, productivity, and consistency, the first InOrbit offering seems ideal for an operational standpoint, while the second InOrbit's focus on aligning meetings, frameworks, and actions could be more suited for teams looking to translate their potential into impactful results.
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    Royce Wong
    InOrbit.io
    InOrbit.io
    @jeremy_j24 Cheers mate. Appreciate you taking the time to digest the content. We'll take your suggestions into consideration.
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