Let's have a Landing Roasting Session
Dan Kulkov
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This one is for brave #buildinpublic folks.
Rules are simple.
1. Share your landing page
2. Comment at least one other landing page. Mention both strong and weak points
3. Get feedback on your landing page from the community
4. Profit!
I'll start first ā https://www.makerbox.club/
Don't hesitate to drop some truth bombs š
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Neil Proctor@neil_proctor
Vault Vision
https://vaultvision.com/ would love feedback
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https://etha.one Let me know
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@nicole_ogloza Hey Nicole!
I liked a lot:
ā Copy is super strong, especially Title
ā design system and colors are appealing
Could be better:
ā it would be nice to include other politicians (too much Trump for me š
)
ā I would highlight privacy issues, because they seem to be critical in such app
ā FAQ is too big, maybe you should make more blocks to cover all topics
hope it helps! would love to hear what do you think of https://www.makerbox.club/
Vault Vision
@nicole_ogloza
- I really like the clean design and simple scroll-flow
- I liked that the app store buttons were front and center
- Product looks neat, I like a new take on social media
- I saw some notes about privacy, but I see a facebook tracker, a google tracker and a CDN tracker
- I also did notice a 403 error in the dev tools console, something to do with a firebase installation