Roast my landing page redesign

I give it a quick 1min scan through the site (avg time a web visitor spend browsing your site is 45-53s) and here are my understandings - You provide a lead gen service - I can do it with embedded form - I can send some automated emails if the user sign up Now what are not clear to me is: - What exact pain point are you solving for me? Is it a lack of lead? If so, quantify it so it's more persuasive - Why should I use your product over other services like ConvertKit/MailChimp? It's not clear - What're the benefits and what are the price I need to pay for them? Misc feedback: - First thing I see is your video => it's a 2.30 mins video, I'm not gonna watch it because it's too long and there's no reason to watch it. I suggest you reserve your area above the fold for simple Tag Line & Sub Tag Line + social proof. For example: Tagline: Professional corporate headshots, without physical photo shoot Subtaglin: Get professional business headshots in minutes with our AI-photographer. Upload photos, pick style & receive 120+ generated headshots. It's very clear what business this app is in (corporate headshot photo) and how it solves your problem (in minutes instead of days) and its outcome (120 photos). Hope this helps :)