What is a good cold e-mail?

Sveta Bay
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Every time I get a cold DM or e-mail, it's awful. But for some products, it's the primary traffic source. So I'm wondering what a good and converting one looks like. Do you have any examples? Maybe even yours? šŸ‘€

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Eddie Forson
I am also learning how to formulate successful cold emails for my current product EnVsion (https://envsion.io). From what I read online the best cold emails are short and straight to the point. By straight to the point they clearly communicate the value the product offers (e.g. make X more money, save Y time, etc.). The recipient know what to expect and can either accept to learn more or decide it is not for them.
Tedel
I often start by just sending a question: ~~~~~ Hello, A quick question, please: Who would be the correct person in your organization to talk about marketing? I ask on behalf of ______, a company that is interested in _____ with yours. With best regards, Tedel ~~~~~ Once they reply, then you have a correrct contact, and you are not sending a cold e-mail any more. They already expect your next letter.
Michael R.
Here's one of my favorite templates. It's a bit wordy, but it engages quickly and flows well. Feel free to copy and adapt the details if you so wish. :) Hi ___XXX___, Hope your week is going well! I must say, your most recent featured piece on the {{YourCompany}} blog was fantastic. The analytics team at {{MyCompany}} even referenced your research in their latest report on the unseen impact of AI. If you're curious, I've attached a copy for review at your convenience. Here at {{MyCompany}}, we just reworked the pricing model for Emblem, our most popular client management software. I'm confident that with {{MyCompany's}} robust cloud-based data tools at your disposal, {{YourCompany's}} growth next year will again eclipse its current record! Today, I'd like to offer you a 30-day risk-free trial of Emblem, presuming it serves {{YourCompany}} well; you'll save 28% annually thanks to our new flat-rate plan. To sweeten the deal, {{MyCompany}} is even willing to feature {{YourCompany}} atop the list of most valuable new clients in our upcoming shareholders' report. Just set up a quick call using my Calendly link, and we'll discuss the details together. Many thanks for your time, and I look forward to chatting with you soon! Respectfully, ___XXX___
Sveta Bay
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@killshot13 I'd never read it šŸ˜…
Michael R.
@basv too long? I prefer shorter emails also, but therein lies the challenge of creating any appeal. šŸ˜… I still think a personalized message can go a long way, especially with the increase in AI-generated content.
Varun Varma
An excellent cold email if it's for sales, should have >> Subject hook (as it makes the reader open the email) >> Attractive 1st line of the body which is usually personalized (not the generic personalization like "we are connected on LinkedIn") >> Problem focus & empathizing statements >> A few stats/numbers on how you have solved for others >> Non intrusive CTA (Remember, you are still knocking on the door, so don't barge in)
Anil Meena
Which give shiver to recipient šŸ¤£šŸ¤£ But jokes aside, I think the best format is to give the context in the first few sentences and sets the objective.
Dzianis Pomazau
Good video from YC about that:
Richa Sharma
Upscale: The Sales Engagement Platform
Upscale: The Sales Engagement Platform
I doubt there is any "perfect" cold email since it depends on the recipient always? What works for you may/may not work for me because our audience may be different. But when I experimented with a campaign (and it worked wonders for us!), I took inspiration from - https://goodsalesemails.com/ - https://betteroutreach.io/ One crucial point was personalization. We tried A/B/C testing with the following types. Type A: regular, boring "I am Richa from Upscale..." Type B: quirky intro and generic body Type C: personalized and direct copy across the email Type C got us the most conversations, but surprisingly Type A also got a few people responding positively. That's why I think there is no "perfect cold email" it all depends on how well you understand your audience and how well you show them that you know them/their challenges/have a solution specific to their pain point. That's been my learning in a short experience. Would love to learn if there are different thoughts/experiences. šŸ¤
Jernej Samide
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Is there even a template that works as a general one? Through our experience sending thousands and thousands of cold e-mails manually and through e-mail automation tools it's ALL about A/B testing. Every new audience reacted on new triggers often needs a certain word count to not skip the e-mail or on the other side even worse not understand what the topic of the e-mail is. I would be super interested in: What are your usual open and reply rates you see for this kind of outreach?
Ashlyn Bambina
Hi Sveta!!! This is Ashlyn, SEO Specialist @ Serpple Private Limited... I have done cold email with good response from the users.. Cold emails are commonly used in sales and marketing to reach out to new prospects and start a conversation with them. Cold e-mail is sending a personal mail to the client or customer to initiate contact with us to generate interest in a product or service. However, it's important to follow ethical and legal guidelines when sending cold emails, inorder to avoid spamming... Let me explain you the format... šŸ‘‰ Good and catchy subject line must be followed. šŸ‘‰ Content must be started with the introduction of users details, problem in work and the solution must be given by us by explaining the benefits of our side... šŸ‘‰ For example: We have Serpple - An advanced SEO Tool to track all your keyword rankings for increasing high traffic with 99.5% accuracy... šŸ‘‰ Content should be short and catchy... Long form content shoud be avoided... šŸ‘‰ Finally, CTA must be given....
Moon
ReplyMind
ReplyMind
For a cold email to be successful, it needs to grab the reader's attention, build trust, and clearly explain the benefits of your product. Just like a hook, line, and sinker!
Sveta Bay
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@moon10 do you have any examples?
Vishal Patel
A good cold email is one that effectively communicates the purpose of the email while also being polite and professional. Here are a few tips for writing a good cold email: 1. Identify your target audience and personalize your email to them. 2. Be clear and concise in your subject line and opening sentence. 3. Provide value to the recipient by offering a solution to a problem they may have or mentioning a common interest. 4. Keep the email short and to the point. Focus on one goal or ask. 5. End the email with a clear call-to-action and provide your contact information. 6. Proofread your email for spelling and grammar errors. 7. Avoid using a generic salutation like "Dear Sir/Madam" and instead find a personal contact if possible. Remember, a cold email is an introduction, so don't try to sell too hard or ask for too much in one email. The goal is to start a dialogue and establish a relationship with the recipient
LisaKim
I always got the highest response rates when I put a personalized comment in the beginning of the email!
Joanne Hurley
@mycelebs_elle Yup this. Depending on how long the list is, its really better to take the time and personalise it for a higher probability of conversion