Which headline grabs your attention and makes you want to click?
Jon Whitby
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ᗰᗩ᙭ ᒍ.@maxjacobs
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Something about "Boost" grabs most that then when you keep reading "Team Productivity Instantly" feels most tangible.
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For me the first one, though you can always use a headline analyzer tool like this (https://webcurate.co/p/headline-...) for in-depth evaluation.
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First one for sure. Clear and straight to the point.
I've noticed that companies have started using copy generated by chatgpt and one can tell, from 30k ft. It repels.
To make the first one even better, add some supporting copy to it to explain in futher detail what exactly this product is.
The fourth one looks nicer. Some thoughts about the headlines:
1. Instantly? I've tried all instant options, it's likely a clickbait.
2. "Unlock potential" sounds too vague.
3. Transform workplace? You mean standing table desks or what?
4. Ok, this is about performance and AI, let's check it.
5. We're collaborating every day, so what?
6. Glad for these guys, is their happiness and productiveness related to your AI?)
Surprised AI is ranking the highest, we aren't tired of reading AI in the title yet?
Hi, what is this headline for, an article or a homepage? They also seem to be for different sections of the page?