Would love some feedback on our landing page!
Amy Choi
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I am thinking about launching my product on Product Hunt but I was looking for some feedback on our landing page as we prepare for this.
www.sprintrr.com
Is it a bit too boring?
Does it say what it needs to say?
Would you recommend anything we missed?
Any feedback welcome at this stage 🙈
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Anil Meena@anil_meena21
Its a neat design. Language is clear. And pleasing color palette.
Quick suggestion though:
1. Instead of tilted mobile, laptop and ipad; I think you should keep it straight so users can see the UI
2. Put a background in the header.
3. Login button currently takes user to sign up page, I think it should redirects to login page.
Rest look good.
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@anil_meena21 Thank you for taking the time to give some feedback. All great points. Nice input in terms of the position of the mock-ups - hadn't considered this. 👍🏻
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Nice page layout, maybe move the Let’s Chat button to the left as you can’t follow on the social media links, I’ve tried landscape and portrait and failed.
I’d review a bit more on your keyword research and add more content as 201 words doesn’t help the cause.
I’m not a lover of WHAT PEOPLE SAY, if it links back to them then yes.
@amy_choi1 Hi you got the wrong end of the stick here, when people write in your WHAT THE PEOPLE SAY I don’t listen to, because it’s not real. I would trust it if it linked back to their website then yes it’s offers great authority.
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I just scrolled through to check out the design, and it looks really good. very sleek.
the one thing that did stand out is the first header " The proposal & invoicing tool freelancers love" highlighted in blue. it sticks out like a sore thumb, but perhaps that is what you're going for. maybe use a lighter blue?
overall it looks great. i like the animation when you scroll for the first time.
I like the design of the site. It's clear and engaging.
The thing I would improve is to describe the product right at the top of the page. When I open the website, I have to go through 5 texts before I know what this product is all about.
"For Freelancers without limits." ⬅️ for freelancers
"100% subscription-free" ⬅️ it's free
"Supercharge your small business for free." ⬅️ it's free
"Join the top platform built for Freelancers." ⬅️ for freelancers
"Stop paying subscription fees and join the Sprint." ⬅️ it's free
👉 Then I finally find out what pain points the product solves.
I'm looking forward to the launch! 🙂
Good product!
Things to have in mind/should be iterated:
- CTA button in the banner should be more visible. Preferably under the heading. Also it melts a lot with the background. Reconsider a darker / contrast color.
- Change the H1 text color and background.
@eliaxvibrant Thank you for taking a look - Yes, I agree with the CTA for sure! I think placing under the heading is a much better idea!
PlayerZero
I like the simplicity of the design, but as far as messaging goes, I think the landing page could be clearer. "The proposal & invoicing tool
freelancers love" is a strong H1, but it needs more support above the fold, maybe shrink your hero image a bit so your supporting text is fully above the fold and expound a bit to make things more clear.
@akoratana Thank you so much for taking a look! Solid advice, will be looking into this right now :) 👍🏻