Roast my landing page!
Tyler Kim
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Heya folks,
Recently launched my landing page:
š https://scraft.ai/
Would be super awesome to have feedback on:
š Do you understand what the product is?
š What do you think of the hero section messaging?
š What do you think of overall copy?
Would love to hear all critique, feedback & advice.
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Richard Gao@richard_gao2
Evoke
š Do you understand what the product is?
Yep, immediately understood what it was. So this is good.
š What do you think of the hero section messaging?
Hero section looks great. Like the design of the image.
š What do you think of overall copy?
There is too much text. I think you could be more succinct. Moreover, there seems to be too much focus on what the product does and not the benefit it will provide. For example, rather than have text explaining how to use the product, I would focus more on its benefits, like saving time, higher quality content, lack of spelling mistakes, etc.
I also think the way the video is embedded in the website is weird. You have to click twice to access it, and it's put in there haphazardly with no transitional space. I would only embed a youtube video in there.
Also, if you're interested, I'm currently developing and API similar to GPT-3 that allows you to connect your app to an AI. It'll be much cheaper than GPT-3 and we won't revoke your access for NSFW prompts.
If you want to stay in the loop when we release, check out my discord server or my twitter in my bio.
Good luck!
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@richard_gao2
Thank you so much for your input!! I certainly agree with you that I may be spending too much text on the product and not the benefit. I will work on that!
Also, I joined the discord server for Evoke! I'm excited to see what you will achieve