Roast my landing page
Toli
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Hi! This week I launched CoherentCode, my programming mentorship service: https://www.writecoherentcode.co...
What do you think about the landing? Does it convey the offer well? I tried to go for minimalism in my design, what do you think about it?
Any feedback greatly appreciated!
Cheers,
Toli
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Claudiu Cogalniceanu@claudiu_cogalniceanu
It’s all over the place. Margins are not consistent, titles are not differentiated, hero section is weirdly split into 2 colours, distance between paragraphs is inconsistent, your second cta comes before the main one instead of the other way around, and it’s too much text to read. Overall, I have no idea where to look, what’s important, what do you want me to know, I just know that you take calls with prospective clients.
Sorry if it was too harsh😀
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Very odd choice of spacing and layout order.
For your Hero section saying Coherent code, maybe add 2 buttons as part of the hero element. One saying Coaching Services and the other saying join Newsletter. I personally like it when a button leads to another section on the website rather than a popup.
For Sections I'd recommend the following order:
Hero Element (Coherent Code)
- How it works (I'd remove the get in touch button)
- Testimonials
- Our Offer
- I'm Anatolii
- Book Now
- Newsletter signup
That's my personal preference, that's kind of the format that I used on my site: https://ctrl-analytics.com/
Take it or leave it, totally up to you!
It can improve. If you're still confused, maybe avoid the justification of the paragraph.